The story we read in class was eleven by Sandra Cisneros. It was about a
girl named Rachel that got a sweater that was not hers and she didn’t like at all. The sweater was ugly, smelly, and itchy. Phyllis Lopez said that it was his in the end of the day. She had to wear it she was really mad. It makes her credible because most kid would get mad too and start to cry. I do that too when my sister does that but I can’t say nothing because then my mom gets mad at me. My little sister gets really annoying.
Rachel is too shy she could have said that that sweater was not hers and did not want to put it on. I think that the reason she did not say anything was because maybe she thought if she anything she would unrespectable the teacher if she talked back and told the teacher that sweater was not hers. It makes her credible because any kid would do the same thing so they won’t get in trouble by the teacher or you feel bad.
Rachel is acting like different ages. She was acting like a three year old. She was wishing that she were 122 years old. They were comparing her to a wooden doll that she might be eleven but she stills has the other ages inside her. She was acting like a three year old because she is crying for the sweater because she didn’t like it. It makes her credible because any kid most likely would do or act the same way.
It was Rachels birthday and it was ruined.Poor Rachel her birthday was ruined because she had to wear a sweater that did not belong to her was really ugly
and had to wear.I think that Rachel is credible because nobody lkes to wear a sweater that it is not theirs. Specially if that sweater is ugly, itchy,and
smelly like the one Rachel had wear.Most kids would get bad if their birthday was ruiend by an ugly sweater like that one she was forced to wear by her
teacher.
I think that Rachel is credible in so many ways.I think mostly everybody is credible. A person could have 30 years years old like Rachel 11years old
but still have the age 3,4,5,6 and the same with Rachel. When i play with my little sister it loks like i am a 4 or 5 years old but i am 11 years old.
No matter what i am still going to have 3,4,and 5 years old and so is Rachel.Rachel is credible like EVERYBODY.
Period 2/3
February 27, 2009
Eleven
The story we read in class was eleven by Sandra Cisneros. It was about a
girl named Rachel that got a sweater that was not hers and she didn’t like at all. The sweater was ugly, smelly, and itchy. Phyllis Lopez said that it was his in the end of the day. She had to wear it she was really mad. It makes her credible because most kid would get mad too and start to cry. I do that too when my sister does that but I can’t say nothing because then my mom gets mad at me. My little sister gets really annoying.
Rachel is too shy she could have said that that sweater was not hers and did not want to put it on. I think that the reason she did not say anything was because maybe she thought if she anything she would unrespectable the teacher if she talked back and told the teacher that sweater was not hers. It makes her credible because any kid would do the same thing so they won’t get in trouble by the teacher or you feel bad.
Rachel is acting like different ages. She was acting like a three year old. She was wishing that she were 122 years old. They were comparing her to a wooden doll that she might be eleven but she stills has the other ages inside her. She was acting like a three year old because she is crying for the sweater because she didn’t like it. It makes her credible because any kid most likely would do or act the same way.
It was Rachels birthday and it was ruined.Poor Rachel her birthday was ruined because she had to wear a sweater that did not belong to her was really ugly
and had to wear.I think that Rachel is credible because nobody lkes to wear a sweater that it is not theirs. Specially if that sweater is ugly, itchy,and
smelly like the one Rachel had wear.Most kids would get bad if their birthday was ruiend by an ugly sweater like that one she was forced to wear by her
teacher.
I think that Rachel is credible in so many ways.I think mostly everybody is credible. A person could have 30 years years old like Rachel 11years old
but still have the age 3,4,5,6 and the same with Rachel. When i play with my little sister it loks like i am a 4 or 5 years old but i am 11 years old.
No matter what i am still going to have 3,4,and 5 years old and so is Rachel.Rachel is credible like EVERYBODY.